The story is half the appeal with this one. (though my inner writer feels like you should have kept Prototype's backstory a secret to be revealed in the story proper)
Now for the drawing. I like how her pose and hair react to the explosion. My main issue is her eyes. Her left eye seems to be bigger than her right. Also it looks like one of the spikes is coming out of her right eye? I'm having a hard time figuring out what's going on there.