You've got some real talent as a writer. There is so much detail to this game and the objects you can interact with, and the game boy style actually works great for the stark horror feel.
I did find one bug. After cleaning the Angel's Eye and putting it back, you can redo the sliding lock puzzle for it's hiding place. I didn't finish redo-ing the puzzle, but I'd assume it would break the game somehow if I did.
@Shadowriter I was able to beat the game, so it seems like you might just be stuck. Did you get the flashlight and use it to light up the area outside the house?